Matt Bellamy

Hi! Welcome to YWS. :) I like your poem, it is interesting and emotional, however there is alwayas room for improvement. The first half flows quite well, but after that, ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. I think your poem has real potential, but there are a couple of things that let the poem down a little. Firstly, the rhyming is a ...

Hello! I think what you have here is the beginnings of a good poem. It just needs... more. Maybe more description and more feeling. Perhaps something that makes it personal ...

Hi there! I really like this poem - you have a very pleasing tone, and it is wonderful to read. Just one or two things though: you begin by describing ...

Hello! Parts of this sound very pleasing. Specifically, the beginning and the end. The middle, not so much. The first two lines, I can relate to, and I like the ...

Hello! There are two main problems I see with this, as it is now. The first is that it doesn't really look like a poem. The only thing indicating that ...

Hi there! I quite like your poem. The rhyming scheme is good and it flows well. It also sounds wonderfully melancholy at the end. However, the only thing I'm uncertain ...

Hey, Octo! Firstly, I really like your tone. I love how you refer to money and pity, and the contrast of feelings between the crowd and the narrator. The italicised ...

Hello, Mo! Firstly, sorry if I repeat anyone, I don't read other people's reviews before I review work myself. I like this poem. Your imagery is good and very descriptive, ...

Hey there! I really felt the emotion in this poem. Also, I like the metaphor in the title. And since it's a metaphor, you don't need the quotation marks so ...

Ooh, I like this! I really feel like music has such emotional importance, both playing and listening, so I definitely approve of this poem. Firstly, I like the way it ...

Hello! The first thing I notice about this poem is the elipses everywhere. I don't think they are necessary in any part of the poem and they distract the reader ...

Hello! This is quite a pleasing poem. The blue does make it a bit difficult to read, though. I was a bit concerned at first because you seemed to be ...

Hello! I really like this poem. It flows beautifully, the rhyming is not forced at all and it skips along nicely. It's also very strong - vivid description and it's ...

Hey there! I like the concept of this poem. A couple of things, though: A lonely bus stop Soon comforted by someone sitting This sounds a little strange because there ...